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PostSubject: Tell me a One word more   Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:34 pm

This is a work write by me, I'm translate this text in English, I hope do you understand!


Tell me one word more that makes me smile

Tell me about anywhere when the door can open only two.

Throw me your caresses, your hag, that makes transport me into faraway places.

Your voice makes me silence, leaves me speechless, without any sense that bears your name.

Nude my senses, discover what my true feelings. Make me shut up when you want to me hear that wind calms me so much.

¿Why this world is so complicated?

You come, hypnotize me softly, you say anything and you leave

No, no, no, this word is complicated.

Tell me one word more, to see if you make me lose consciousness, that makes me tune in to see your presence.

It will be your voice, your eyes or your mouth, but in this life would die for you, because my life likes you, and everything you do.

Why a simple word make me fall, laugh or happy?

Why is so frustrating to conquer you?

You come, You say hello, and you leave.

No, no, no, this life is so complicated.

Under your mesmerizing words, I can’t say "no", your voice is so sweet and so beautiful that I can’t deny anything.

Now just thinking about you and when I sleeping you speak to me.

Tell me anything that I can feel the winner, give me a touch more

I have wandered too long in foreign lands and inhospitable, and now that I have, I'm not afraid of difficulties and problems involving see you while maintaining that warm presence that entertains me in the winter nights

Hopefully never change that way you reject to me.
Hopefully the time will not change you
No, no, this life is complicated






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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:46 am

thats great.
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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:51 pm

There are a few parts that I don´t understand but I get the message and I think that´s really great:)
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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:18 pm

Sorry, that is write an Spanish.... Sorry so much
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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:20 pm

Why do you say sorry?
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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:22 pm

Don't worry, translating can be a pain. D:

I thought it was very good. ^__^

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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:50 pm

Livi wrote:
Don't worry, translating can be a pain. D:

I thought it was very good. ^__^


Tell me about it... English is a bit hard to translate. Again, nice work!
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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Thu Feb 18, 2010 4:36 am

Es muy bueno, usted es un escritor muy bueno, y la forma en que se presenta parece que podría estar fuera de un álbum de Evanescence

(For all those who don't speak Spanish, I said: It is very good, you are a very good writer, and the way it is presented sounds like it could be off of an Evanescence album))

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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Thu Feb 18, 2010 5:56 am

Es muy bueno... donde lo puedo leer en español?

English spoken: Wicked!!! It´s great... where can I read it in spanish??

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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:57 am

Wow, it's very nice! Can you post the Spanish version too??
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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Thu Feb 18, 2010 2:41 pm

Of course, this is in Spanish:
Dime una palabra más, que me haga sonreir.
Háblame de algún lugar donde cuya puerta solo podamos traspasar los dos. Lánzame tus caricias, tus abrazos que me transportan a lugares lejanos.
Tu voz me silencia, me deja sin habla, sin sentimiento alguno que no sostenga tu nombre.
Desnuda mis sentidos, descubre cuales son mis verdaderos sentimientos. Hazme callar cada vez que quieras hacerme escuchar ese viento que tanto me tranquiliza.
¿Por que este mundo es tan complicado?
Tu vienes, me hipnotizas a media voz, te despides y te marchas.
No, no, no, este mundo es complicado.
Dime una palabra más, para ver si me hacer perder la conciencia que me hace temblar al ver tu presencia.
Será tu voz, yu boca o tu cara, pero en esta y en todas las noches moriría por tú, y es que a mi vida le gustas tu, y todo lo que haces.
¿Por que con una simple palabra me haces caer, romper, reir y feliz?
¿Por que en cambio conquistarte es tan frustrante?
Tu vienes, me saludas, te despides y te marchas.
No, no, no, esta vida es demasiado complicada.
Bajo tus hechizantes palabras, no puedo decirte "no", es tan dulce tu voz y tan hermosa que no puedo negarte nada.
Ya solo pienso en tí, y cada vez que duermo me hablas.
Éxplicame alguna cosa que pueda hacerme sentir victorioso, dáme una caricia más.
He bagado demasiado tiempo por tierras extrañas e inhóspitas, y ahora que te tengo, no me asustan las dificultades ni los problemas que supongan verte, me da igual todo mientras pueda sentir tu cálida presencia que me abriga en las noches más frías.
Ojalá que nunca cambie esa forma que tienes de rechazarme
Ojalá que el tiempo no te cambie.
No, no, no, esta vida es complicada.


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PostSubject: Re: Tell me a One word more   Thu Feb 18, 2010 3:22 pm

Muy bien! It´s even more beautiful in spanish. Thanks for translating.
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