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Raph95 Admin

   Age : 13 Joined : 27 Oct 2007 Posts : 1118 Location : Niš Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:17 am | |
| Hey, cool! But still, your one is better, really! _________________
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|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:32 am | |
| Hold on. Mike couldn’t stop his brother from shaking, and morbid fascination caused him to wonder how the terrifying shudders were possible considering the position his brother was in. The missile from Stockman’s robotic machine had made a mess of the warehouse and it was no surprise, as the building started to shake, that Leo had barked out orders to run. It started to crash down around them and Mike had seen Raph and Don on the other side of the room before they were separated by debris, he felt hands shove him to the side and twisted around. He watched in horror as Leo tumbled backwards and the steel girder and brick fell on top of him, the sounds of the building crumbling were silenced as the sickening crack of his brother’s shell met his ears. He scrambled on hands and knees towards his downed elder brother, his heart pumping wildly in fear. Leo’s lower body was pinned, his left arm trapped as brick covered his shoulder, Mike frantically pulled away as much as he could but soon found that he couldn’t free Leo of any more of the debris. It was simply too heavy.He cradled his brother’s head and tenderly tapped his cheek; Leo’s breathing signalling that he was still alive… barely.“Leo?” his voice trembled and he silently cursed himself for showing his fear, he had to reassure him that everything would be okay, he needed to be strong.Leo’s eyes fluttered open, his expression riddled with pain and confusion. He tried to glance around but found that he could only look up. He didn’t want to move, it hurt too much. “Everything’s going to be okay, Leo. Raph and Don are probably looking for us right now.” Mike tried again to pull at the heavier brick and steel, his growl of frustration turned into a scream as he heaved with all the strength he had.Leo’s head shook slowly, “You can’t lift it,” he breathed. “I have to try,” Mike responded, “I’ve got to do something! I can’t just leave you here like this!” “Mike-” “No!” he cried, “Don’t give up, Leo. Please just hold on.” “I can’t.” Leo’s shudders continued; his breath became ragged as he squinted his eyes shut against the pain.Mike abandoned his futile efforts and returned to his brother’s side, his head snapped to and fro as he searched for anything that could help them. “Raph! Don!” “I don’t… don’t think they can… can hear you.” Leo rasped.Mike stared wide-eyed at his shaking brother, he knew that he had accepted his fate but Mike wasn’t prepared to let him go. “Go… find them. They… they might be hurt too.”Mike shook his head, “No, I’m not leaving you here. I don’t want you to fall asleep if I go.” Leo didn’t respond. Mike moved in close so that his brother could see his face, he rested his hand on Leo’s head, “They’ll be here soon, you know they’ll be looking for us. You have to try and stay awake, I know you’re tired but you’ve got to.” Leo’s eyes opened to look up at his baby brother, his grimace tore through Mike’s heart. “The pain… it’s overwhelming… I feel like I’ve been broken in two.” Mike nodded sadly, “It’s your shell, I think it’s cracked but I don’t know how bad it is.” “Oh,” he replied, “that explains it.” “Try not to think about it, I know that sounds stupid but you’ve got to think about something else.” He gently stroked his thumb over his brother’s creased brow in an attempt to ease his pain somehow. Leo groaned and tried to move but a shooting pain across his back stopped him. “Shh, easy bro, just rest.” “I… Mike, I’m sorry.” Mike tilted his head in confusion, “What do you have to be sorry for?” Leo ran his tongue over his dry lips, “for getting us into this… for not moving… fast enough.” Mike allowed a small laugh to escape, “Leo, you’re always taking the blame for things. Even now you still think it’s your fault.” Leo gulped with some effort, “This time I’m… I’m allowed.” Mike’s laugh died quickly, “No, you’re not. You’re buried under all this because I wasn’t fast enough.” Silence. “Leo?” Mike’s heart began to race furiously; he shook his brother’s shoulder as he suddenly feared the worst.Leo coughed harshly, his body wracked with pain. He breathed in sharply and twisted as much as he could to try and stop the hurt, it really was unbearable. Mike sighed with relief at Leo’s movements but quickly recovered and tried to soothe his brother.He glanced up to the window that was halfway across the room, he contemplated going out of the window in search of his remaining brothers convincing himself that he’d only be five minutes. Could he leave Leo that long? “Leo, I need you to do something for me. I want you to keep talking whilst I go to that window and see if I can see Raph and Don, can you do that?” Leo gave something resembling a nod and Mike patted his shoulder, “Good. Start talking, I won’t be a minute.” “You want… want me to tell a… story?” Mike smiled, “Sure.” The silence in the room made it easy for him to hear Leo talking, “When… when we were young, Raph… got lost in the sewer tunnels. Sensei… he was out scav… scavenging for food, you and… Donnie were asleep. I went looking… looking for him, he hurt his ankle… when he fell.” Mike stretched out of the window, he scanned the area but couldn’t see any sign of his brothers, he sighed dejectedly. “He shouldn’t have gone out… Sensei… Sensei wasn’t happy… when he found out.” “I remember seeing Raph with his ankle bandaged when I woke up that morning.” Mike responded, showing Leo that he was listening.Leo nodded slightly even though Mike wasn’t near him to see it, “When I found him, he… he was crying, but don’t… don’t tell him I… told you. You know… how he gets about that.” “Your secret’s safe with me, bro.” Leo smiled, “He… he was so happy to… to see me.” Mike frowned, “Wait. I remember Splinter being mad at you, why?” Leo grimaced as pain hit him again, “I… I told Splinter that I made… made Raph go with me into… the tunnels.” “You covered for him.” Mike stated, he wasn’t surprised. “Raph… was hurt, I didn’t want… want him to get punished for going out… as well.” Leo replied. Mike moved away from the window and headed back to Leo, “Why do you always have to stick up for us?” Leo smiled as best he could, “Because… you’re my baby brothers, I’d… I’d do anything for you. ”Mike returned the smile, “Then I want you to do something for me now, and that’s to stay with me. Don’t leave me alone here.” He tenderly stroked his brother’s face. “I’m trying… I won’t leave… you alone.” Leo reached his free arm up and gripped Mike’s hand. Mike became frightened of Leo’s weakened hold. “Mike!” Mike looked up, relief washing over his face at the sound of Raph’s voice, “Over here!” He turned back down to Leo with a warm smile on his face, “See? I told you they’d find us. Everything’s going to be okay now.” “Hmm.” Leo’s eyes drifted shut, his breathing becoming slow and quiet.Raph slid to a stop by Mike’s side; his eyes widened at the sight before him, “Holy sh**.(~edit~) ”Mike cradled Leo’s head in his lap, “Raph, where’s Don?” “Right here.” Don replied, he too stopped when he saw Leo. “Oh God.” “We have to get this stuff off of him, he’s hurt bad.” Mike commanded, he pushed at his brothers to move them into action.Raphael and Donatello heaved at the debris covering their brother, Leo cried out in pain when they moved the steel girder from his chest and Raph stepped back to allow Donatello to check his injuries. “Give me your belts!” he shouted as he threw his arm back, palm out. “What’s wrong?” Raph asked as he pulled the belt from around his waist and handed it to his kneeling brother. “His carapace is cracked in half, I need to secure it before we can move him otherwise it’ll kill him.” He pulled his own belt from his waist and carefully tied it around Leo’s chest and stomach, Mike ripped his away and threw it towards Raph, never once taking his gaze from Leo.Leo opened his eyes; his hazy and glass-eyed look sent a shiver through Mike’s body. “You’re… not alone… now” Mike’s eyes widened, “No! Leo, no don’t! Hold on! Please hold on!” Leo smiled, he reached up and gently touched the side of Mike’s face, his breath slowed and steadied before his eyes drifted shut.Tears streamed from Mike’s eyes, he rocked back and forth on his knees, his arms cradling his brother. “Please… hold on.”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Seriously, I was crying when I first read this... But this isn't the 'darkest' story I've found, but I'll look for more...  _________________
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|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:35 am | |
| | Raph95 wrote: | | Hey, cool! But still, your one is better, really! |
Hey, sorry Raph, I don't know if you notised those earlier messages, but (sorry) I didn't wrote that first one... And I can't imagine myself about writing happy story like that one (not enough imagination!-_-)! I like more writing sad, painful stories..  _________________
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|  | | The Demonic Kitten
 Joined : 02 Mar 2008 Posts : 91 Location : Left from here Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:08 pm | |
| And now, I liked this 'darker' story, X-Leo =) Poor Leo... |
|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:10 pm | |
| | The Demonic Kitten wrote: | And now, I liked this 'darker' story, X-Leo =) Poor Leo... |
That's good! But..yeah...  _________________
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|  | | The Demonic Kitten
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:12 pm | |
| X-Leo =( Daaaamn, I'm too sentimental for such stories -.- But I still like 'em! ;p |
|  | | Raph95 Admin

   Age : 13 Joined : 27 Oct 2007 Posts : 1118 Location : Niš Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:47 pm | |
| I won't read this today Could you put a bit longer one, please  _________________
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|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:41 pm | |
| | The Demonic Kitten wrote: | X-Leo =( Daaaamn, I'm too sentimental for such stories -.- But I still like 'em! ;p |
Yeah me too, once I found some very sad stories, and I read couple, but then I stopped cause I was crying all the time and they gave me a headache...-_- But I just can't stop reading them!  _________________
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|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:42 pm | |
| | Raph95 wrote: | I won't read this today Could you put a bit longer one, please  |
Ah, ok! Later then, huh?  _________________
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|  | | MIKEY

   Age : 16 Joined : 09 Mar 2008 Posts : 78 Location : Austrailia Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Mar 09, 2008 7:02 pm | |
| wow all i can say  |
|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Wed Mar 19, 2008 2:17 pm | |
| Raphael- Two Simple words
------------------------------------------------------------------- I don’t get it. Why can’t I say it? It’s not like it’s a big deal or anythin’. Juz two simple words. Two words - and that’s it! Even as a kid I couldn’t do it. I dunno how many times they’ve given me crap for it... How many hours I’ve spent locked up in my room, ta ‘think my actions through,’ like Splinter so many times told me. Well, Splinter’s gone now. I’m too old for punishments and yet I still can’t say them damn words! I’ve imagined myself sayin’ ‘em a thousand times, at least. So I know I can do it. But every time the moment comes, my ego freezes up and I can’t get it out. I juz can’t push myself ta say it. Every- fu****’ -time I leave it unsaid, I always hafta deal with the shattered look on their faces, that hurtful look in their eyes. And I dunno if any of ‘em knows this, but in truth it hurts me just as much as it does them. It’s not like I wanna be an a**hole. They might think so - but I don’t! I don’t wanna be the constant bad guy, who’s always responsible for tearin’ our little family apart. Someday, though, I’ll show ‘em. I’ll show ‘em I’m not that guy and I’ll tell ‘em what they wanna hear; what I’ve been meanin’ ta say for so damn long, it’s ridiculous. I swear, if it’s the last thing I do in this fu**ed up life a’ mine, I’ll look ‘em straight in their eyes and I’ll tell ‘em once and for all. I’m sorry.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This looked really interesting when I found it, and awwww....poor Raph...He just can't say it!  (I edited some parts, but I think that you'll notice which parts... ) _________________
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|  | | Raph95 Admin

   Age : 13 Joined : 27 Oct 2007 Posts : 1118 Location : Niš Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Wed Mar 19, 2008 2:37 pm | |
| Yeap, I see what xD I don't have time now to read those  _________________
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|  | | LoveXXXLeonardo

   Age : 17 Joined : 17 Jan 2008 Posts : 366 Location : Finland *sweet* XD Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Fri Mar 21, 2008 1:15 pm | |
| | Raph95 wrote: | Yeap, I see what xD I don't have time now to read those  |
Yeah! Aww, but hey don't worry, they aren't going to go away...If you're bored someday, you can come here and read them But I understand that you're busy, but don't stress yourslef too much, like I, and because of that I'm mostly feeling mentally sick nowdays...  _________________
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|  | | Raph95 Admin

   Age : 13 Joined : 27 Oct 2007 Posts : 1118 Location : Niš Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Fri Mar 21, 2008 2:27 pm | |
| Thanks... Plus today is my B-Day, and I have a headache >_< I won't censure, like you did: FUCK IT! _________________
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|  | | Raph95 Admin

   Age : 13 Joined : 27 Oct 2007 Posts : 1118 Location : Niš Warning Level :
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 | Subject: Re: TMNT stories Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:51 pm | |
| The Darkness of the NewYork City Chapter First Part One
by me
It is a warm evening in the NewYork City. The shiny moon casting light upon the town - it was beautiful. A lot of tourists were waling down at the streets of this town. All the clubs were openined, where young people were coming and meeting each other. Oh- look at it! Looks like one boy is going out with a girl. They met in club. It's not cold as usually - even older people can go out and enjoy. Some old ladies are in park, talking about Spanish TV series.
But the town isn't like this everywhere. In small streets, the gangs are haging out, drinking at robbing people. They are usually in alleys - hiding and waiting for somebody to robb. The police is too lazy to go and do something about it. As it's beautiful in big towns with a lot of people, it's also very scary to be alone in the street. Every time somebody can catch you. Even kill you.
Oh my God! It's happening right now. An old lady is going in the street. She is scary, but she's hoping that the gang will not catch her. She does't know they are just waiting for her.
"Hello old lady", said one of the gang members, and got out of the shadows. The oldy lady was too scaried to act. "You look like a very nice lady", said the other guy, jumping from the roof of the small garage. The woman screamed and felt to the gound. "Oh...", said one of the gang members. "Don't worry. We won't do anything bad to you!" "Yes...", said the fattest one. "We're just going to take your money" "Hmm...", said one of them, while he was getting closer to the women. It was obvious that he was the leader of the gang. "If you stay calm and give me money, we won't hurt you. But if you make even a move and try to keep money..."
He didn't complete the sentence, and he pulled his knife out of his jacket. Easily, and scary, he touched his neck with the sharp knife, pointing at the poor women. She screamed.
Four more shadows were getting closer, easily. They were so quiet, that, even the women wouldn't see them, if there wasn't a moonlight. They looked scardy. Women could see only theirs siluetes. And suddenly -- punch! punch! bang! crash! tik-tok! pheew! -- and all the gang members were lying on ground, uncounsions. the women was not sure what did she see, but four strange guys left. she just stood up and ran away... she didn't know that the four guys were still looking at her from the rooftop of the bulding near.
"We saved somebody again", said one of them. Now, finally, when they were all on the top of the building, their faces and the whole body could be seen well. They all were in size of a human, totally green, but each in a bit different tone of green. They all were wearing a badanna of different color. The one that has just spoken was wearing a blue badanna. The other were wearing red, orange or a purple one.
Also, each of them had a different weapon. The one with blue mask had pair of katana. The second one, with purple mask, was wearing a bo staff on his back. The third, with red mask, had pair of sharp sais, while the last one, with orange mask, had a pair of nunchakus.
"If this continues like this, we will become Teenage Mutant Ninja Turltes Police!", shouted one with red mask. "Be quite, Raphael!", said the one wih blue katana. "It has passed 5 years since we were ninjas. Now, with Karai as the president, it's not the same. There are spies all over the city, just waiting to see us! And even... kill us". "Oh, come on, Leonardo!", said Raphael. "It's not so bad! At least we were training all those years! We are much better than we were. Why don't we use these few days when Karai is out of the USA and just kick somebody's ass!" "Leo, Raph, ssh!!", said the one with the purple mask. He poined at the edge of the buliding. There was something strange, that isn't on the top of every building. "A camera, Don?", Leo wispered. "I think so. But, I don't think it saw us... Unless it heard us...", said the one with the purple mask. "Mikey", he turned head to the one with orange mask. "Give me my glasses. They are in the bag". "Here you are, Don", wispered Mikey, giving them to Don carefully. Don took them on the head and looked throu them. "Oh no! They have sound proccesor inside! And it's one of the stronger - "Karai680 - Z series". But, however... Give me few minutes... We are at least 9 meters away fromt he camera, and maximum 11 meters. In the worst case, when we are only 9 meter away, our foots are exatcly 9 meters away from the camera. But, our heads are a bit more than 9 meters. By using Pitagore's Theoreme, I can see that the destination of our heads to the camera is, counting that we are 1.65 meter tall... 9.34 meters. The maximum sound destination ever made is 8.3 meters" "Oh, thanks God...", said Leo. "But..." "Huh?", said Mikey. "Why is there always BUT?" "But, as Karain owns very good sound techonology, she could increase the soudn destination for 11 percent. So that is... 19.13 meters. So, this means we weren't heard. But, I'm afraid about our footsteps. We were wasling slowly. I don't think the sound cound be so loud to get to the sound detectioner. But, if we move only a bit, it could hear us. We need some small rock... Anything that is heavy to make a louder noise than our footsteps. But, don't make even one step. You mustn't move your legs at all" "But... There's no stone...", said Leonardo. "Hm... Damn it...", said Don. "All of you, give me your wepons. Don't you dare to flip them. I have a plan. I just hope we could reach at least 8.3 meters.. If I don't get all the weapons in a line that's at least 8.3 meters long, than we can't hide our footsteps good enough. |In the worst scenario, we will die". _________________
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